
If you haven't heard the song
"I Get Off" by Halestorm,
you must hear it now!

you can find the song on YouTube!
[link]
It's an amazing song
and I made a copyright-free limerick!

(Song Limericks are
creative-writing poems that are based
off of songs. However, Limericks change
the original wording of the song and
substitute phrases and words created by
the limerick writer.)

In another words, you listen to the same
melody/beat of the song using your choice
phrases that fit with that beat. Some songs
can be very simple. others, not so easy to
"limerick".

Here is my poem/limerick. I used Halestorm's
hit song "I Get Off" and substitued in my own
words. I hope you'll love it!
[you may either just read it or you can fully
understand it by some-what listening to the song
while reading the words. it's not as long as you think]
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You'll Be Gone ("I Get Off" by Halestorm - limerick)Every time I think of you,
the thoughts cross through my mind.
and I can't seem to stop myself
to smile when i see you cry.
(your car is gone and lost for good,
and your house is burnt to dust)
and i could shut the thoughts off
but i wanna see you rust!
--chorus--
This is my revenge!
And i'll continue it!
To see you break yourself!
until that fire is lit!
And because of you,
This is what i'll do!
I'll tear you apart!
And you'll be gone!
You'll be gone.
--part 2--
I must say, i'm not jokin'
when i think of fire and rust.
i really am considering it.
Would you consider that lust?
(You might think i'm crazy
or maybe i'm a fool.)
But this is where i'll find you
and I will spill the fuel!
--chorus--
This is my revenge!
And i'll continue it!
To see you break yourself!
until that fire is lit!
And because of you,
This is what i'll do!
I'll tear you apart!
And you'll be gone!
You'll be gone.
--guitar--
--bridge--
But don't you know?
What you've done to me?
You've forced me new.
And now you'll see,
--soft chours--
This is my revenge.
And i'll continue it.
To see you break yourself
yeah!
--hard chours--
This is my revenge!
And i'll continue it!
To see you break yourself!
until that fire is lit!
And because of you,
This is what i'll do!
I'll tear you apart!
And you'll be gone!
Oh, You'll be gone!
--guitar--
Yeah! you'll be gone!
You'll be gone.
[Thank you! i hope you liked it!
comments are always good!]
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